Valley of Thorns pt.12

posted 8th Aug 2013, 2:01 PM

Valley of Thorns pt.12
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8th Aug 2013, 2:01 PM

Chernobog

Ahab's outlook on this extends from her childhood with Zipper and her sense that everyone she cherishes (outside of Marcus) leaves her too often. So she falls in love quickly to compensate and then becomes unable to mentally let them go. Mallory, meanwhile, gets a lot of her nature from Ahab, minus the stifled upbringing issues. And Black Hatter, who's influenced both of them, quietly exists as a magnifying glass between the two.

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11th Aug 2013, 2:32 PM

Grey Garou

I love the depth to which you develop your characters.

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11th Aug 2013, 11:17 PM

Chernobog

My thanks, good sir.

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12th Aug 2013, 3:05 PM

jerrie

I second that. your character development is great. you get pulled deep into this story

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